Author Note

UnitMComics

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Punching Out

This is probably my favourite page of this issue.

The barista’s punch is super satisfying, panels are balanced, lighting is mostly good (maybe a bit too bright in the lower panels), and everything gets wrapped up quickly and efficiently.

If I had to change one thing, it would be the positioning of Meteor and Shield in the last panel. They should be reversed so the conversation flows properly.

11th Apr 2020, 8:26 PM

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Issue: Unit-M - Issue 0.1
Post Date: 22nd Dec 2018, 1:19 AM

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Nearly a new favorite page but it seems very unlikely that the barista would get a speeder like this, even given that he was distracted.

That said, Unit-M should hire said barista: That was a monster-punch.

And the barista should wear flats. These shoes look like flats with glued-on heels.

A little in-story issue: Carrying off a not completely unconscious speeder (he's stumbling) like that - will they make it out the door before he gets himself together enough to take off?

9th Mar 2019, 7:29 AM

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Her heels are actually part of the same package as the rest of the barista outfit.

The fit isn’t quite right. The heel on her left foot in particular is weirdly warped. I also don’t like how reflective the soles are.

In an earlier script I had a few panels devoted to explaining how the authorities were going to contain Vamos once they re-captured him.

It seemed extraneous so I cut it.

9th Mar 2019, 10:10 PM

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> The heel on her left foot in particular is weirdly warped.

The shoes seem strangely soft. Much more like flats than regular high-heels.

> It seemed extraneous so I cut it.

Yeah, would probably add nothing to the story here, only flatter nerds like me :D (For real: They could have drugged him or something.)

10th Mar 2019, 12:45 AM

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That punch is quite satisfying XD

16th Mar 2019, 10:27 PM

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I really like this punch too. One of the better action panels.

29th Mar 2019, 11:04 PM

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