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Unit-M - Issue 0.1 - Page 7

 

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I really like the top two and bottom two panels on this page. Unfortunately, the middle panel just doesn’t work, which is kinda problematic as it’s the first panel that introduces Vamos’s speed powers (guy in orange who will be introduced soon).

The problem lies with my decision to remove the panel borders and background. I’ve since learned that you really can’t do that with two adjacent panels.

I also should have made the motion blur on each iteration of Vamos a little longer. It’s hard to see on some of the figures.

15th Jan 2019, 3:19 AM

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Indeed, the motion blur is not so impressive. Gets the message over but with a heavy accent ;-)

8th Mar 2019, 9:55 PM

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I think I get better at using motion blur to indicate speed/movement as the comic goes on.

It sucks here though.

8th Mar 2019, 10:21 PM

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