5 against one. The Unit-M team clearly has the greater number. They may win - if they are 5. If Derringer manages to knock out Meteor or otherwise remove him from the fight, I think he will win - if only to escape, that's all he needs.
Old or new?
I'm rather undecided between black or white. But... maybe 51:49 pro-white?
About panel 3... I'd say, the blur on the old page is too much but a little bit more on the new page wouldn't hurt. Especially... IMHO the punch should cause a little blur on Meteor's head.
The updated page isn't quite working for me either. It's that third row. It's one of those things that seemed more cinematic in my head, but I can't get it to translate on the page.
Maybe they need actual backgrounds? I don't want to spend too much more time on this page. I may just live with it as is.
I haven't found a way to make blurring work when the character is breaking out of the panel. Because there's no background for contrast, those parts of the character always just look blurry, instead of conveying motion.
Such fight! Much violence! I'm always hoping the good guys win, especially since I want Evil Mc. Beardydick to get his comeuppance. I don't have a clear preference between the old and the new versions. Apart from white versus black background in the penultimate panel, my puny defective eyes were not able to detect much of a difference. Great job as usual!
Totally forgot that I have a ComicFury account. I am the commenter previously known as Nerdy Roses. Truthfully I prefer Nerdy Roses, since Isis now has a terrible meaning. Le sigh...
>>Totally forgot that I have a ComicFury account. I am the commenter previously known as Nerdy Roses. Truthfully I prefer Nerdy Roses, since Isis now has a terrible meaning. Le sigh...
PM the admin, Kyo, and he'll change your username for you.
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Page: 119Issue: Unit-M - Issue 1
Post Date: 12th Jul 2021, 6:20 AM
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Fight! Fight! Fight!
Any bets on who will win?
EDIT. Decided to take another crack at this page. Made a few changes. Old page is below. Let me know if you like the new one better.
EDIT II. Revised this page again with some helpful suggestions from ...(RockB).
12th Jul 2021, 6:25 AM
5 against one. The Unit-M team clearly has the greater number. They may win - if they are 5. If Derringer manages to knock out Meteor or otherwise remove him from the fight, I think he will win - if only to escape, that's all he needs.
Old or new?
I'm rather undecided between black or white. But... maybe 51:49 pro-white?
About panel 3... I'd say, the blur on the old page is too much but a little bit more on the new page wouldn't hurt. Especially... IMHO the punch should cause a little blur on Meteor's head.
12th Jul 2021, 9:17 PM
The updated page isn't quite working for me either. It's that third row. It's one of those things that seemed more cinematic in my head, but I can't get it to translate on the page.
Maybe they need actual backgrounds? I don't want to spend too much more time on this page. I may just live with it as is.
I haven't found a way to make blurring work when the character is breaking out of the panel. Because there's no background for contrast, those parts of the character always just look blurry, instead of conveying motion.
13th Jul 2021, 11:50 AM
Hm... both backgrounds seem... detached and calm. Is it that, maybe? If yes, I have an idea. Maybe a bad idea. I'll send a PM.
13th Jul 2021, 12:08 PM
Such fight! Much violence! I'm always hoping the good guys win, especially since I want Evil Mc. Beardydick to get his comeuppance. I don't have a clear preference between the old and the new versions. Apart from white versus black background in the penultimate panel, my puny defective eyes were not able to detect much of a difference. Great job as usual!
Totally forgot that I have a ComicFury account. I am the commenter previously known as Nerdy Roses. Truthfully I prefer Nerdy Roses, since Isis now has a terrible meaning. Le sigh...
14th Jul 2021, 6:04 AM
>>Totally forgot that I have a ComicFury account. I am the commenter previously known as Nerdy Roses. Truthfully I prefer Nerdy Roses, since Isis now has a terrible meaning. Le sigh...
PM the admin, Kyo, and he'll change your username for you.
>>Great job as usual!
Thank you!
14th Jul 2021, 11:04 AM
Isis was an Egyptian goddess. I refuse to let some acronym made up from the self-given name of a group of ... humans (to put it mildly) spoil that!
14th Jul 2021, 10:27 PM
Yay!
This row of panels looks now speedy!
(Also, I read all answers :-) )
14th Jul 2021, 10:33 PM
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