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UnitMComics

UnitMComics UnitMComics said:

An earlier version of this page had a radial-blur zoom effect in background. Decided I didn't like it and swapped it out for a version without the effect.

Original attached for posterity.

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8th Oct 2021, 10:53 PM

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Page: 126
Issue: Unit-M - Issue 1
Post Date: 8th Oct 2021, 1:29 PM

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UnitMComics

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Any guesses on Meteor's special job for Izzy (Blackout)?

Also, any guesses as to how many pages are left in Issue #1? Just curious about where people think we are in the story.

8th Oct 2021, 1:38 PM

thing1

thing1 thing1

no guesses, but...

this appears to be the final climactic battle against "the villain". this story has dragged on long enough. it's time to take down Derringer in the most spectacular manner imaginable!

9th Oct 2021, 12:02 AM

UnitMComics

UnitMComics UnitMComics

I agree. The story has “dragged on.” I wanted something epic. The kind of drawn out fight scene that you don’t see often in modern comics anymore (unless the entire issue is one big fight scene).

This is too long though. I should have prioritized a tighter product when editing this section.

Hopefully the conclusion to “climatic battle” satisfies. 🤞

9th Oct 2021, 4:42 AM

...(RockB)

...(RockB) ...(RockB)

Well, guesses: At least 1 page for the fight, possibly up to 4 pages, then some wrap-up (1-3 pages), and at least a conversation with Simon (1 page) or maybe with Simon and the team as it is now (then 1-5 pages). So at least 3 pages, at most 9 pages left. Hmm, let's make it at most 12 pages for no special reason, who knows :D

(I'd still like to know whose cameras were floating around, although I suspect it were Derringer's.)

Thinking about it, Izzy/Blackout said at one point "I It* was my design." Derringer's suit? Or - Meteor's suit?

Anyway, I think that Meteor wants her to hack & disrupt Derringer's electronics.

But - will they have the time??

*: dammit, such typos can change the meaning completely or reduce it to zero.

9th Oct 2021, 3:22 AM

UnitMComics

UnitMComics UnitMComics

You’re pretty close. Good analysis. 👍

I don’t want to commit to an actual number, as I still make tweaks to the layouts if something isn’t working, which can alter the number of pages.

9th Oct 2021, 4:50 AM

Dah Debil

Dah Debil Dah Debil

I totally read that as TWERKING...

9th Oct 2021, 8:04 AM

UnitMComics

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🤔

9th Oct 2021, 10:00 AM

...(RockB)

...(RockB) ...(RockB)

Yay :D And that with typos and mis-counting.

9th Oct 2021, 5:25 PM

Joe Fonebone

Joe Fonebone Joe Fonebone

Don't know what Izzy's specialty is. RockB may be right. Perhaps hack Derringer's suit.

Considering that this is the first issue, perhaps the length can be forgiven, or at least understood. Even so, I would like to see a conclusion. Hopefully within a dozen pages. Go for it!

9th Oct 2021, 9:57 AM

UnitMComics

UnitMComics UnitMComics

While I think there’s maybe a page or two I could save by re-jigging this fight. On the whole, there are probably more pages where the story would be better served by spreading the content over two or more pages. Some of the earlier pages in this issue are too busy.

9th Oct 2021, 11:08 AM

Joe Fonebone

Joe Fonebone Joe Fonebone

By the way, wise decision on the swap out! No advantage to it.

17th Oct 2021, 4:15 PM

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