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Issue: Unit-M - Issue 1
Post Date: 27th Oct 2021, 1:51 PM


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Can people tell that Dreadlocke is throwing her projectile talons? Or is it too hard to see?

27th Oct 2021, 2:31 PM

I'am a Redguard!

I'am a Redguard! I'am a Redguard!

They are a little hard to see, but they are there.

28th Oct 2021, 1:31 AM

Joe Fonebone

Joe Fonebone Joe Fonebone

I can see them, but just barely. I have Defective Color Vision, and the range of colors I see is limited.

28th Oct 2021, 12:20 PM


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This is one of those things where 3D comics are at a disadvantage. In a 2D comic, I could always warp the perspective to make them appear larger, and thus easier to see.

I can only go so far in 3D before things start to look off. I’ve actually already increased the size of the talons by 300% to make them easier to see. I tested upping the size even more, but it started to look weird and out of place.

28th Oct 2021, 4:14 PM

I'am a Redguard!

I'am a Redguard! I'am a Redguard!

Maybe if you had done a smaller panel showing the talons launching from her fingers? That may have worked! Also, can she just extend her talons or does she have to launch them and can she do the same with the class on her feet?

3rd Nov 2021, 12:34 AM

Dah Debil

Dah Debil Dah Debil

The talons are hidden by both the blur tool and the background color. I didn't notice them until you mentioned it. They might need something akin to a motion indicator older comics used.

28th Oct 2021, 7:47 PM


thing1 thing1

the final battle begins! make it spectacular!

...and decisive. I want to see them beat the crap out of Derringer.

28th Oct 2021, 11:52 PM

Dug zan

Dug zan Dug zan

Hard to make them stand out in a busy scene. I agree with the close up frame idea but it might have interfered with the flow of action, which is fantastic, by the way.

20th Nov 2021, 7:26 PM

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