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Issue: Unit-M - Issue 1
Post Date: 22nd Dec 2021, 8:00 AM

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The design of this page (especially the background) is a pretty wild departure from anything I’ve previously done. Is it too much? Is it too different?

22nd Dec 2021, 8:05 AM

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Updated this, and the past two pages, adding a new speech balloon for Meteor. Wanted to make it clearer that he's providing instruction to his teammates.

22nd Dec 2021, 8:19 PM

Joe Fonebone

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Don't see a word balloon as yet, so it's a bit difficult to figure out what's going on. It looks like the attacking woman is getting hit with the beam, maybe losing an arm. And who is generation the force bubble? Is she doing that herself?

23rd Dec 2021, 11:08 AM

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>> Don't see a word balloon as yet, so it's a bit difficult to figure out what's going on.

Thats’s weird. Can you try clearing your cache? The text balloon doesn’t really add much to the page. There isn’t my even text in it.

>> It looks like the attacking woman is getting hit with the beam, maybe losing an arm.

Really? It’s supposed to be cleanly going by her. I guess this isn’t clear.

>> And who is generation the force bubble? Is she doing that herself?

Shield (the woman inside the bubble) is generating the force field. That’s her power.

23rd Dec 2021, 12:06 PM

Joe Fonebone

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OK. Today the word bubble is there.

For me, it looks like the beam may be going right into her arm pit. It kind of looks like it may be at least grazing her. I would expect the beam to carry through, as is shown.

Thanks for clarifying Shield's power. I'm sorry for not using her name, but I couldn't remember it, and you don't have a cast listing.

24th Dec 2021, 2:41 PM

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>> For me, it looks like the beam may be going right into her arm pit. It kind of looks like it may be at least grazing her. I would expect the beam to carry through, as is shown.

I’ll see if I can tweak this. Maybe I can make it clearer.

>> Thanks for clarifying Shield's power. I'm sorry for not using her name, but I couldn't remember it, and you don't have a cast listing.

No worries. Easy to forget. It’s not like I’m diligently updating this either. It can take months between pages.

I’ve thought about a cast page, but it seems like the kind of thing you make after a few issues. I haven’t even managed to complete issue #1 😆.

24th Dec 2021, 5:51 PM

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As readers,we try to be patient. We know you have a life. So far, the pages have been worth waiting for. There are a few comics out there, who should either get oh with it, or take down the site. After and entire year of nothing, I don't see them coming back. Please don't let that happen here. If you get to a point you just can't, or don't want to do it anymore, say so, and stop! Don't leave us hanging. Just pay us that courtesy.

25th Dec 2021, 2:38 PM

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Thanks for your patience!

If I did have to stop, I’d probably just post the script for the remaining pages.

Hopefully that doesn’t happen. The finish line (at least for this issue) is so so close.

25th Dec 2021, 4:33 PM

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