Average Page Rating: 5 (1 votes)
5th Feb 2022, 9:56 PM
Yeah. I know. It's a bit of a let down.
5th Feb 2022, 10:09 PM
I have to admit t I totally expected it to go off - and doing little damage. Or... filling the small room with nothing but smoke... something like that.
8th Feb 2022, 2:56 PM
We don’t know how powerful the grenade is. Maybe she was worried it would kill him.
8th Feb 2022, 3:09 PM
Originally, I had intended for this and the previous page to be one single page. But it was too much, so I divided the content across two pages.
While the previous page works well, this one suffers.
5th Feb 2022, 10:02 PM
LIL too cocky there.. Backup plan in 3..2..
7th Feb 2022, 1:36 AM
Maybe. We’ll see 🤔
7th Feb 2022, 7:33 PM
I wonder if his suit,like Nasa's astronaut suits, can hold quantities of uriine. I'm pretty sure he just pissed himself. As he should. As for this page being anti climactic; ya gotta have a few pauses to take stock of things.
7th Feb 2022, 1:38 PM
I have not considered this scenario. I feel like the answer is “no.” He can’t relieve himself in the suit. Don’t hold me to that though.
It’s not that it’s anti-climatic. It’s just that not a lot is happening. This section of the comic has a few different pages (both before and after this) that feel short and a bit superfluous. They’re not. It’s just how I broke up the script to make other pages more impactful.
7th Feb 2022, 7:41 PM
Is remote BOOM still an option?
8th Feb 2022, 1:28 AM
That’s an excellent question that I don’t have an answer for, but probably not.
8th Feb 2022, 9:03 AM
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