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UnitMComics

UnitMComics UnitMComics said:

In The Buff

This could have been better done.

As I recall, I just rendered six scenes of RedPill talking without planning anything out, such as which scene would go where or where the speech bubbles would fit.

Had I spent more time planing this out properly, I think this could have been more impactful.

Dave is being guided here. He’s reading off a script, likely with Danielle standing watch just outside the frame. Unfortunately, neither of those things are obvious and they really need to be.

(I do like how I added buffering to the videos. Totally unnecessary and time that could have been spent on something more worthwhile to this page.)

12th Dec 2020, 2:01 AM

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Haegan2005

Haegan2005 Haegan2005

Oh my. Anyone notice that he is not looking at the camera?

Edited.

He is looking at his screen. My bad. Never mind!

She straightened him out!

17th Feb 2019, 1:54 AM

UnitMComics

UnitMComics UnitMComics

It’s certainly plausible that this apology is less than genuine, or that someone is waiting just off screen, script in hand, cracking her knuckles.

17th Feb 2019, 5:33 AM

Haegan2005

Haegan2005 Haegan2005

Ahhh! Gotcha!

17th Feb 2019, 1:14 PM

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